Alone by Jill Chan

 





http://fictionaut.com/stories/jill-chan/alone.pdf
Exposition: This woman is in heaven, she is probably dead when she was young. 
Rising Action: She starts to feel lonely, even though she has some friends in heaven, she doesn't have and lover.
Climax: She cuts herself and feels no pain because she is in heaven, but she feels pain in her heart(emotionally)... 
Falling Action: She imagines that there is an aquarium in her house, and there are goldfishes and one angelfish, angelfish that's lonely, like herself. And she thinks about their freedom, and if they are happy there. 
Resolution: She looks at the aquarium and smiles, then she feels them smiling back. And she is less lonely even she knows that this is only imagination.

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